Question

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His kiss so sweet
his touch is hard to beat
i love him with all my heart
he tells me im beautiful and smart
when he looks at me and only me
i know thers nowhere else i'd rather be
in his arms i feel safe
in him i have faith
I love him so much
i live to feel his touch
he never lies
ill never forget those eyes
Staring into my soul
making me feel whole
i love how he is strong
with him nothing is wrong.
Even if its just a hug
his love is my drug.

Answer 1

nice you experiencing true love!!! there

Answer 2

haha it wasnt about anyone :P

Answer 3

i just wrote what i want in love lol :P

Answer 4

but have you met this guy yet???

Answer 5

cuz its gonna be a thrilling experience

Answer 6

nope lol havent met this guy yet lol and i hope so!!! ^ ^

Answer 7

yeah me tooo ....so have you ever had plans for Africa???

Answer 8

your good!

Answer 9

i need help to write an essay

Answer 10

just start and send me a copy ill help polish it for you!!!!!!here my email.....elroy.20@live.com

Answer 11

the easy form is mus include :

-name of a drug
-history of drug
-street name
-short +long term effect
-how is it ingested
-what effects does it have on body
-anyother intersting facts

Answer 12

The rhyme scheme is too predictable and the syllables are stretched. You avoided a major cliche in the end which is good. This could use more structure and more details, however.

Answer 13

ik :P but u have to take into context that i didnt write this off any 1 person i wrote a fantasy of what i want in a relationship!! ^ ^

Answer 14

Why? What does that have to do with the delivery of the poem? A lot of early poetry that is written, evades a heuristic approach or empiricism. One may muse over the stars without the sounds of a violent nebula, nor the heat of them. Most poetry IS fantasy. Regardless of the experience, the delivery and the basis of engaging the senses becomes the deciding factor of good poetry vs. bad.

Answer 15

yes. correct so what would u say about my poem then? What is good about it and what needs to be worked on per say.

Answer 16

oh wait nvm same person!! ^ ^

Answer 17

@democrates it aint as as you think i believe the main purpose of a poem is to express your feelings and your thinking not just following some steps making it kinda classic