Question

pie day poem! constructive criticism is appreciated...

Answer 1

I like to eat pie
What’s so wrong with that?
According to my doctor,
It’s making me quite fat.

I eat my pie for breakfast,
I eat my pie for lunch.
I eat my pie for dinner,
With a cup of some fruit punch.

I eat my pie at home,
I eat my pie in school.
I eat my pie during winter storms,
And summer by the pool.

I love all pie of any flavor,
Pumpkin, peach, or cherry.
Apple, pecan, Banana crème,
Key lime or blueberry.

I once tried “veggies”.
They weren’t really any good.
I don’t think I'll eat them ever again.
My doctor says I should.

If you asked me “What’s your favorite pie?”
I don’t think I could choose.
If you asked me “What’s your favorite number?”
You might get confused.

You see, it’s 3.14159
26535…
By the time in which I finish,
You may not be alive.

Today is March 14th,
The best day of the year.
The day in which I celebrate
With pie and lots of cheer!

Answer 2

aww thats pretty cute!! lol good kids poem xD

Answer 3

that is great! We are going to tweet it!

Answer 4

haha u should read mines too tell me what u guys think!!

Answer 5

Thanks guys. Yes, I'll definitely read yours.