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To Kill a Mockingbird Essay.... the criteria to check for is - awkward/run-on sentences
-grammar mistakes -good vocabulary -good substance in essay

There are parents who influence their children in positive ways through negative situations. In Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird, Scout, the narrator and protagonist of the book, and her brother, Jem, learn that they should stay true to what they believe is just and right when their father takes on a trial that involves rape and racial prejudice. The two siblings also discover the ugly truth of reality whe

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please help edit, if possible...:
To Kill a Mockingbird Essay.... the criteria to check for is - awkward/run-on sentences  
-grammar mistakes -good vocabulary -good substance in essay

There are parents who influence their children in positive ways through negative situations.  In Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird, Scout, the narrator and protagonist of the book, and her brother, Jem, learn that they should stay true to what they believe is just and right when their father takes on a trial that involves rape and racial prejudice.  The two siblings also discover the ugly truth of reality whe

anonymous · Answer

are you in the 8 or 9th grade or somethin? cuz i did this essay in one of those grades im a sophomore now, so i might be able to help you with any of your english!! (:

anonymous · Answer

im a freshman

anonymous · Answer

sorry for the late reply...i had a school play that i had to attend

anonymous · Answer

here's the intro and body paragraphs of this essay.  I'm still working on the conclusion....