I need someone to give me a reply on my book..here's the prologue...It's a little long on this thing

Prologue
“Are you sure?” I whispered over my shoulder.
“Of course,” a voice assured behind me. I looked down and saw a huge pool of what looked like green goo.
I shook my head. “I won’t do it.”
“Oh yes you will!” the voice yelled as it pushed me off the ledge. Apparently, the voice was some kind of figure.
“Ahhhh!” I screamed sitting up… Sitting up? Why am I sitting up while falling?
“Oh, it was just a dream, thank God.” I said slightly relieved.
I started standing up, and saw mysel

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I need someone to give me a reply on my book..here's the prologue...It's a little long on this thing

Prologue
	“Are you sure?” I whispered over my shoulder.
	“Of course,” a voice assured behind me.  I looked down and saw a huge pool of what looked like green goo.
	I shook my head. “I won’t do it.”
	“Oh yes you will!” the voice yelled as it pushed me off the ledge.  Apparently, the voice was some kind of figure.
	“Ahhhh!” I screamed sitting up… Sitting up? Why am I sitting up while falling?
 “Oh, it was just a dream, thank God.” I said slightly relieved. 
 I started standing up, and saw mysel

anonymous · Answer

nice really creative task.