Question

Please give feedback on my poem:
At night, they wield their scimitars, sharp,
To snatch from those who fear,
The gift of life that they so love,
The life they hold so dear.
And runs away, like speeding light,
The life they hold so dear.

Unfettered by the neon lights,
They flash their deathly blade,
And he who holds a coward's heart,
Is nothing but dismay'd.
The one who runs away from Death,
Is nothing but dismay'd.

Answer 1

pretty good i like it

Answer 2

I LUV THIS POEM

Answer 3

thnx

Answer 4

welcome

Answer 5

there r 6 more paras like these

Answer 6

rly? kool

Answer 7

the last 4 deal with defeating these demons of death by illuminating your soul

Answer 8

ohh...that's kool

Answer 9

wow this is a very deep and strong poem. I think you definitily have talent!! since u obviously kno ur poetry read some of mines!! :) pls? :) lol