Question

tell me if this poem is any good!!!
(I got really bored and its useless..lol)

I cannot write a
Poem that is worth the time
Even though this rhymes

Answer 1

Love it! Keep writing :)

Answer 2

Haha!! I think you could have made a much better poem Olivia! :) I mean if you can write stories you can write poems!! :D

Answer 3

lol i kno! Im doing a poetry project in english and am sooo lost

Answer 4

Well i can ALWAYS help!! u kno im a poet!! :) hit me with ur assignment :) :D

Answer 5

okay well we have to write seven poems. Four of them have to be a different orginazational pattern...I have one, its really short, and its an organazational pattern called a triangular triplet

Answer 6

Alright I dont think i remember those organizational patterns by name so what all do you have to have... :)

Answer 7

mkay..
these are the patterns
free verse
narrative poetry
haiku
acrostic
diamnte
cinquain
couplets
triangular triplet
five W's
verd "ING" phrases
Lyrics
Alliteration

Answer 8

Alright i have heard of basically all of them and in a tst i had to memorize them so im pretty familiar with em but i just didnt recongnize the triangular triplet one. So which patterns are you thinking of doing?

Answer 9

haikus, triangular triplets, lyrics, and maybe some other ones

Answer 10

Alright so then arent haikus like a poem of 3 line with 5 syllables on the first line 7 syllables on the second and 5 on the 3rd?

Answer 11

yeppers

Answer 12

hmm for a haiku u could do this:

When your feeling down = 5 syllables

and on ur face is a frown = 7 syllables

just never give up = 5 syllables

Answer 13

good? :D lol not my bestest.i dont rly like haikus :P

Answer 14

i love that!!!!!!! can i use it for one of my collected poems???

Answer 15

course!!!! :) lol

Answer 16

i have a book of collected poems too ^^

Answer 17

okay now the last one was lyrics right? what is your schools deinition of lyrics.. ^^ might be different than my schools since im in high school ^_^ lol :)

Answer 18

kool...nd idk...i guess like a song. I write songs, idk if they'd count tho

Answer 19

Okay so that DEFINITELY counts!! :) hmm i have only ever written one song ^_^ lol hit me with ur song lyrics!! :)

Answer 20

lol. i don't have like my good ones here with me. but heres one.

I've been walking on broken glass
Staring through the cracks
Everything's been torn away
Everything's astray

I got a broken heart
I got a mixed up mind
Been trying to get back to start
But i'm only loosing time...

Answer 21

thats all i have rite now

Answer 22

:D i RLY like that so far!! :) u should put that in ur assignment for school!! :)

Answer 23

lol I WILL!!:)

Answer 24

okie dokie i think thats al of ur requirements rite? :) lol well there ya gooo!!! :D haha i feel like a teacher... ^_^

Answer 25

lol u'd make a good one! :)

Answer 26

:D!! a good english teacher maybe lol but definitely not a good math teacher blaghh i hate math :P lol

Answer 27

lol me too..in my school, i'm in seventh grade math (im in sixth grade) and its nooooooot fun

Answer 28

lol! my little sister is in sixth grade!! xD we live in WA state! ^^ lol and ya lol that means ur taking pre algebra rite? thats weird cuz thats the only math i got A's all yr in ^^ :)

Answer 29

haha i guess its pre algebra..all i know that its a bunch of blah blah blah...lol

Answer 30

LOL!! ya i dont know how but i got good grades that year ^^

Answer 31

thats good! did you say you lived in WA state??

Answer 32

yeppers!! i live ther!! :) u?

Answer 33

the sunshine state!!! FLORIDA!!! lol