here's a poem..(its a song) plz tell me what u think!

I've been walking on broken glass
Staring through the cracks
Everythings been torn away
Everythings astray

I got a broken heart
I got a mixed up mind
Been trying to get back to start
But i'm only losing time...

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here's a poem..(its a song) plz tell me what u think!

I've been walking on broken glass
Staring through the cracks
Everythings been torn away
Everythings astray

I got a broken heart
I got a mixed up mind
Been trying to get back to start
But i'm only losing time...

anonymous · Answer

pretty good..keep working on it

anonymous · Answer

yea it is keep up the good wrk

anonymous · Answer

thank u..

anonymous · Answer

I heard this before from somone else..... so i dont believe u wrote it but i still like it!! :)

anonymous · Answer

oh wait... LOL u ARE the person i heard this from lmao oopsies! soweee olivia!! :)

anonymous · Answer

there is a time for us to be heard, or the times when we dont need a word, we must know when to sit back and relax, and live our lives to the max.... etc.. just thought of it now hahaha its pretty lame

anonymous · Answer

Ahwww no its not lame just corny >:D lol

anonymous · Answer

haha i know right lmao...