Question

Read my poem since no-one was in the English/ Writing room i posted it here this will prolly be the last time that i post a poem in this room :P its in a comment read!!!! O_O

Answer 1

I cant believe how much i cant do

Why cant i be with you!!

You make me smile more than ever

They say, let him go, NEVER!!!

I just want them to see

Please i beg you to agree

I want you to realize how much he means

No, dont say oh ur only in your teens!!!

Didnt you ever have that person who made

you feel like with one look he could make the world fade

You cant help but laugh when he is around

And he picks you up when your down :)

I just wanna wrap my arms around ur neck

to bring you back down when ur a wreck :)

ooh just go on your desire

rile it up and let it fire!!

make me want you even more

You know who this body was made for >:D

Drown urself in me dont just take sips

Come on, let me feel ur lips

i want to be under your body

i truly am your dolly :)

never let me go!!

i will wrap my legs around u like a bow

Your never leaving

oh u kno im teasing :)

u make me want more than i thought i ever would!

And ik u'd be so good :)

With you is where i want to be!!

So plesssss never give up on me!

So mom cant u see the way i feel for him!

no! this isnt some teenage whim!!!

If you dot let me go i;ll go on my own

the way he makes me moan

nope Im not ur little girl any longer

with every day i grow stronger :)

I will always love you

u know thats true...

but something bout that boy

makes me feel like more than just a toy :)

Now i hope u understand my point of view

honestly nothing else u CAN do.

he is mine now and he knos it

My heart has reached the limit

I love you mom so much

but i LIVE to feel his touch!!!!!!

goodbye now mother

sorry but he just isnt like any other :)

Answer 2

amazing!!!

Answer 3

oh my god, water is running over my eyes...

Answer 4

nice

Answer 5

That good? Or that bad?

Answer 6

bad, thump down

Answer 7

keep trying girl,...

Answer 8

haha im hoping ur joking O_O

Answer 9

WorldBoy is being a jerk. Look honey, you're good enough to have your stuff published. But the worst thing you can do is post it on the internet for someone to copy and claim your work as their own. If you'd like to try to get them published, search online for sites that will either publish you for free, or you can enter into contests, which will also get you published. You don't want someone to use your words as their own. <3

Answer 10

OHH EMM GEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 u r soooooooooooooo right!! wtf was i thinking?!?!? :( U r very wise :)

Answer 11

Poetrynation.com is a good one if you want to enter a contest. Who knows, maybe you could win some big bucks just doing what you love to do. :D

Answer 12

OHH EMM GEE!! is there a age limit on the thing? :)