What do you think about my poem so far?

Harsh words don't leave marks
But every word cuts like a knife
Though wounds of the heart cannot be seen
They are still there

Freedom of speech
Say what you want
But once the words are out
They can't be returned

Question

What do you think about my poem so far?

Harsh words don't leave marks
But every word cuts like a knife
Though wounds of the heart cannot be seen
They are still there

Freedom of speech
Say what you want
But once the words are out
They can't be returned

anonymous · Answer

Perfect!

anonymous · Answer

I like it alot it could have a little more rhythm but then again so could alot of poems! i think the meaning is stunningly clear :)