i need help on my writing!!!

Philip Malloy
Have you ever met a devious little boy? Well, I have. In the story “Nothing but the truth,” by Avi, a boy named Philip Malloy was very devious. Philip Malloy was a funny person, then a stubborn person.
There are many ways Philip was a funny boy. He cracked so many jokes that could’ve been serious. For example, when he said, “Girls go for guys that win,” (pg.3). He was so in love with track that he said that.
Another trait that can describe Philip Malloy is stubborn. He was very into himself, he thought only of him, and what’s best for him. An exa

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i need help on my writing!!!

Philip Malloy
	Have you ever met a devious little boy? Well, I have. In the story “Nothing but the truth,” by Avi, a boy named Philip Malloy was very devious. Philip Malloy was a funny person, then a stubborn person.
	There are many ways Philip was a funny boy. He cracked so many jokes that could’ve been serious. For example, when he said, “Girls go for guys that win,” (pg.3). He was so in love with track that he said that.
	Another trait that can describe Philip Malloy is stubborn. He was very into himself, he thought only of him, and what’s best for him. An exa

atlchic · Answer

help!@

shadowfiend · Answer

What about that do you need help with?

anonymous · Answer

I see some grammar mistakes mister :(

atlchic · Answer

im not a mister. im a chic a gurl.

atlchic · Answer

can you show me how would you write this story essay character analysis.