Question

Please check this

Answer 1

ITS attached

Answer 2

I think this is great!

Answer 3

use the review feature in word - as with any editing don't take any of it personal - if you don't like the suggestion blow it off. Only two-ish spelling type errors the rest I THINK (just opinion) ignore if you like - would make the story tighter. Pretty good stuff overall. I do like Hemingway's advice on getting rid of 'really' and usually 'very' can go too. GL