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I think this is great!
use the review feature in word - as with any editing don't take any of it personal - if you don't like the suggestion blow it off. Only two-ish spelling type errors the rest I THINK (just opinion) ignore if you like - would make the story tighter. Pretty good stuff overall. I do like Hemingway's advice on getting rid of 'really' and usually 'very' can go too. GL
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