Question

A poem I wrote last week:) Wacha think???

Answer 1

Hoot! You just asked your first question! Hang tight while I find people to answer it for you. You can thank people who give you good answers by clicking the 'Good Answer' button on the right!

Answer 2

Feeling the pain come
my mind races to find a grip,
hoping,
pleading,
to stop whats coming,
happening,
to my crippled spirit
slowly slipping from that perch,
my very essence bleeding out
as an unseen elixir,
this empty,
squalid husk falters,
slipping,
from that heavenly perch
called life

Answer 3

Ahww why did u have to post YOUR poetry!?!?!? now minez looks like chopped liver in comparison :P
LOVE IT!!!!!

Answer 4

lmao, I wish, THANKS:D

Answer 5

woooow amazing

Answer 6

ikr!! he is too modest :p

Answer 7

thanks

Answer 8

im going to post one

Answer 9

Okie dokie (:

Answer 10

it's good!