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Plz read & comment on this...

Answer 1

Down the corridors I pass...
Those voices, those laughters
They seep within me,
and echos in my heart
Down the corridors I pass...
Small fights, small quarrels
The taste of naughty innocense,
it just hugs me tight
No grudge, no revenge, no rivals
Why? Why? Why?
We forget..we ignore..
The darkness ! For we care fun alone
In our world, its all about friendship
It makes us happy & gives us comfort
Friendship...its sprouts & grows
But the strongest of them
buds in a school !
I convey with a bouncing heart
with my friends & my loving teachers
Still loving the moments at school
Really ! It is the best place to be
Now, its our turn
And I'm loving where we are at
The tree shades...
The sunlit corridors...
The dark buzzing stairs...
Bravo ! Just Bravo !
For a lot of friendship fairytales,
For the everlasting laughters
And fo what I am now...
I owe my school
Its not a lie,
The most happening & exciting
are the school days !
And with extreme passion...
I am "living" each & every second of it
A thought of the last day at school..
A frightful shiver...Oh! can't think of it
Here is my life..here is my soul..
How can I go alone ?
Oh ! School..
For me you are precious,
coz. you give me my golden days
I wish , I had them forever...
..............................forever...

Answer 2

its good

Answer 3

thanxx

Answer 4

wow

Answer 5

cute, nice poem

Answer 6

thanxxxxx