Question

Rate my poem i published called Caged (:

Answer 1

Caged

oh now, arent i smart?
I let him take my heart...
He took it, stole it away
Predator, im his prey
Oh my, arent i strange?
Those pics, we exchange
I am just a walking mistake
How many do i need to make?
I am not some coward
I am empowered
I will move on, i will find
My way, i wont be blind
I cant lean on you any more
cant Let you be my floor
Stand on you, use your support
NO! your not my damn consort!
I must break free, from your curse
I must, before it gets worse
I cant let you take me in your arms
Let you keep me from the way of "harms"
No, no.... NO!!! i cant, i wont. no not me
I wont let myself get on my knees
I cant succumb
Dont give in, dont go numb
Dont let him say its all okay,
Dont give in to the words he'll say!!
You cant, you must stand on your own
Dont let him hear you moan...
He knows how you conflict
He knows the feelings he inflicts
He doesnt want you to go,
So he does all he knows
He tries to make you forget
He doesnt want to pay his debt
He knows he owes me, for the hurt, the pain
He has always kept me on this chain
But not now, i can resist
I dont care what you insist
I have broken free from his grasp
No longer, my heart he clasps
I have taken it back!! I wont be controlled!!
No longer will i do what i am told
I will do what i want to, what i think is right
No longer do i need you to be my sight
I fly through the air, finally free,
No longer under lock and key
The animal has escaped, the one you contained
You tried, always kept me chained
Always keeping me restrained...
Never letting me fly
Never let me ask why
Dont question me, you said
I remember how i pled...
Well, who is begging now
My pain, i avow
But that time is through
Not a thing you can do
Goodbye now, this is the last time we talk
Now, it is time, now i walk
Walk from all the pain, walk from the hurt
Now it is my time, my life to assert
I will live the way i please
not caring, if anyone agrees
Goodbye, And i hope you get all you deserve
To lock ME up, you sure had nerve..
But you see, now you will pay
There is just no other way
Well, bye now, you wont see me again
My heart, you wont ever attain

Answer 2

TOO GOOD TO RATE!!!!!!! 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 out of 0.0000000000000000000000000000000000001

Answer 3

:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Heh it could nevah beat your 2 second poem though!! Nothing could beat the awesomeness ^_^ LMFAO

Answer 4

LMFAO, If you say soo:P What should I name it?

Answer 5

Hmmm how about
"the fail" lmfao

Answer 6

Ok, sure:P Ill have to post it, but too bad noone reads my stuff:/

Answer 7

I do (: I just cant understand this stupid new ap ;P

Answer 8

Me either:/

Answer 9

Kevin better watch out... i am a pro creeper >.<

Answer 10

Besides... i got YOU to help me... and your a close second when it comes to creepiness ;D

Answer 11

lmao, A "close second"? whatever, ok:P

Answer 12

Hmmmm
Okay.. meesah not as creepy as Arky :D

Answer 13

No, you deffinetly are:P,lol

Answer 14

Heh
You know it darling >;D
Its because i dont hold back.....
do that, and you have mastered the art of creepiness :D

Answer 15

LMFAO, ok:P

Answer 16

I liked it so much. I write something as well.

Answer 17

Okie dokie!! :D Wait.... you mean you write like that too? (:

Answer 18

Yes, but not so good.

Answer 19

Ohhhh
:D haha are you saying i write good? :D:D woot woot !