Question

PLEASE, RATE MY POETRY BELLOW:

DAY IN DAY OUT

THEN SHOW ME THE WAY
I´M AFRAID BUT I MUST TRY
THE WORLD IS AN ILLUSION,
ITS flutterING GAME I´M GOING TO WIN.
DAY IN DAY OUT, THE RULES ARE SO CRUEL
I HAVE TO BE PREPARED TO FIGHT.

IT´S NOT A SHAME
WHEN A MAN CRIES,
BECAUSE EVERY TEAR WRITES A PAGE OF HIS LIFE.

Answer 1

Hoot! You just asked your first question! Hang tight while I find people to answer it for you. You can thank people who give you good answers by clicking the 'Good Answer' button on the right!

Answer 2

dont swear in your poeams other wise it was nice

Answer 3

i agree with qwerty108

Answer 4

agree with qwert

Answer 5

hey vincicuis ccan u help me?

Answer 6

Thanks guys! In fact, I was so subjective.

Answer 7

Hi Krazytacoo!

Answer 8

Hey, I got alot of tests that i need to pass, may I have some help?

Answer 9

how?

Answer 10

Just help plz

Answer 11

what are the tests?

Answer 12

Oh I'll copy and paste

Answer 13

did u see it?

Answer 14

i didn´t

Answer 15

http://openstudy.com/groups/writing+and+english#/groups/writing+and+english/updates/4df0b06e0b8b4ced9455aca4

Answer 16

now, I got it. I ´ll open it.

Answer 17

k

Answer 18

I must go out now. See u later

Answer 19

subjectivity is not bad. It is a good thing. That's why I still prefer the romantic age

Answer 20

me too, dhruba. I´ll post another calls "when loneliness comes", rate it.