Question

I am not good in English, please check if my grammar is correct.
this is about the importance of pencil

Pencil symbolizes learning and knowledge. It shows us a simple object but very useful on studying. When the lead of the pencil broke you will sharpen it to make it usable again or enhance it. This is our similarity when I am being low I am improving myself to perform better again.
Pencil is important to me because it helps me a lot on my studies like solving Math problems.
continuation on my answer.......

Answer 1

I don't want to be a pencil because when it break it is not useful anymore and you are sharpening it for a short period and not for a long time and I don't want to be like that because i want to be good as time goes by or even improve myself.

Answer 2

A pencil symbolizes learning and knowledge. It is a simple object and is very useful for studying. When the lead of the pencil breaks you will sharpen it to make it usable again or enhance it. This is similar when I am performing poorIy and then I improve myself to perform better again.
A pencil is important to me because it helps me a lot with my studies like solving math problems.

I don't want to be a pencil because when it breaks it is not useful anymore and you sharpen it for a short temporary period and not for a long time. I don't want to be like that because I want to be good all the time goes and even improve myself.

Answer 3

Thanks!

Answer 4

hi mongazer - i've also answered this in the maths room - jimmyrepin

Answer 5

@mrjoselson what is the meaning of all the time goes in the last sentence?