Hey so can someone help me look over an analytical essay?

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anonymous · Answer

What is the topic?

anonymous · Answer

It's an analytical essay over an essay by George Orwell titled "Politics and the English Language."

anonymous · Answer

Sorry I haven't read that. :(

anonymous · Answer

This is my best grammar/writing critique so let me know what you think. I hope it helped!

anonymous · Answer

Are you there?

anonymous · Answer

I can check it out, if you wish more feedback.

anonymous · Answer

I read over your essay, I agree with who ever proof read this and put notes on it (assuming that was your instructor) all and all you seemed grasp the fundamentals of the topic.

anonymous · Answer

It's great! Except....one thing!

1. Make sure the font is the same the entire way through. It can kind of trick the eyesight once the reader has gotten used to seeing one font.

anonymous · Answer

Hope that helped :)