Question

A song I wrote!
And am getting published ^_^
Tell meh watcha thank xD

Answer 1

Everything in me
Reminds me of you
Everything I see
Reminds me of you
Momma says
I'm so much like you.
I got your nose,
Your compose
But, Daddy,
What I wouldn't do
To have you.

To have you tickle me still
Like you used to
To have you fulfill
Daddy, I miss you.
Why couldn't you stay?
Every night I pray
You'll come back to me
You'll come and see
Me. I'm not the same
I'm a fiery flame
Daddy, I got strong
You left me
And that was wrong
You told me a lie
You made me cry
You didn't care
Yet
I needed you there
To tell me I'm beautiful
But daddy couldn't
Just as usual
Daddy, I don't know what to say
Because what you did
It wasn't okay.
Do you know your little girl cries?
Can you see tears in my eyes
You wanna know why

Everything in me
Reminds me of you
Everything I see
Reminds me of you
Momma says
I'm so much like you.
I got your nose,
Your compose
But, Daddy,
What I wouldn't do
To have you.

Not a thing I wouldn't do
For just one day with you
You an your southern drawl.
You and your messy scrawl
You holding me when I cry
My needs, you'd comply.
I would walk if I have to
Just for a day with you.
To be loved, by you dad
To be given
All I never had.

Everything in me
Reminds me of you
Everything I see
Reminds me of you
Momma says
I'm so much like you.
I got your nose,
Your compose
But, Daddy,
What I wouldn't do
To have you.

Daddy's gone, and he wont call
No daddy, an his southern drawl.
No daddy an his messy scrawl
No daddy and all his love
So I just pick myself up
And I get through
I just move on
And love you.

Answer 2

you are getting it published? nice.

Answer 3

Yea ^_^

Answer 4

I know this girl xD

Answer 5

I love this song

Answer 6

without melody, it's hard to comment .. but the content is good

Answer 7

im not a huge fan of daddy issues being expressed to such a degree, but best of luck to you

Answer 8

its beautiful!soo much of luvv is shown in the song!

Answer 9

Wow thanks!!!! xD
I have others if you are interested!!! :D

Answer 10

hey i showed just the chorus to my friends (i have two) that lost their fathers and they cried. so thank you!! :)

Answer 11

we cried together

Answer 12

WOW!!!
You should show them the whole song!!!!
I will try to get in contact with you or just post the link to the youtube vid
Whenever I make one of me singing and playing piano (:
I'm glad I can make a song that can show empathy (:

Answer 13

Wonderfully written.Liked it.I too write songs.Can you be in touch with me?

Answer 14

Of course!!
By what means ? (: