Question

http://www.scribd.com/doc/60137554/Fashion

Please read my essay on this link and give me some useful feedback. Also discuss whether I will be able to win any prize in the school essay contest of our group(grades 9-10).

Answer 1

Proberly should be in the English section of OpenStudy.

Answer 2

Ok, I will post it there. I posted it here so that many can respond. Anyway, read and have a say.

Answer 3

I've done a fair share of essay's in my days, and this has no 'structure', either that or I've been taught a different method to writing essays.

Answer 4

I tried to write on different headings. I had earlier posted the earlier sub-headings there. Please suggest any tips. I am in grade 10.

Answer 5

do you have to write only on fashion or u can choose topic

Answer 6

Only Fashion.....

Answer 7

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you shud consult some book

Answer 8

It was not available in any gud book. I took it from many websites and a couple of videos.