Question

Rewrite the paragraph below correcting any errors.

sharon is planning an anniversary dinner for her father in law on saturday december 15 2007 the event was held at the ritz carlton at fernandina beach it is a surprise so it is hardest to keep it a secret

Answer 1

IM back in action! xD

Answer 2

Sharon planned an anniversary dinner for her father in law on Saturday December 15th 2007. The event was held at the Ritz Carlton at Fernandina beach.It was a surprise so it was hard to keep it a secret.
This is wht i think it may be

Answer 3

Sharon is planning an anniversary dinner for her father in law on Saturday, December15, 2001. The event will be held at the Ritz Carlton at Fernandina Beach. It is a surprise so it is hard to keep it a secret.

Answer 4

did he really planned for it>

Answer 5

?

Answer 6

Sharon is planning an anniversary dinner for her father in law. On Saturday December 15th 2007, the even was held at the Ritz Carlton at Fernandia Beach. It was a surprise so it was hard to help it a secret.

Answer 7

2007 is gone and since u have a stated time in the past shouldn't it be past simple? O.o

Answer 8

The last sentence should be, It is a surprise so it is hard to keep it a secret.

Answer 9

why is mathguy helping for English>

Answer 10

?

Answer 11

Sharon was planning an anniversary dinner for her father in law. On Saturday December 15th 2007, the even was held at the Ritz Carlton at Fernandia Beach. It was a surprise so it was hard to help it a secret.
Its right now , i hope

Answer 12

yup that right, except with a comma after 15

Answer 13

Oh yeah my bad
Sharon was planning an anniversary dinner for her father in law. On Saturday December 15th, 2007, the even was held at the Ritz Carlton at Fernandia Beach. It was a surprise so it was hard to help it a secret.