Rewrite the paragraph below correcting any errors.

today we went to the aquarium to look at the marine life in the tanks were many types of fish and mammals the man was feeding mako sharks by hand james had the chance to feed the deers and may swimmed with the dolphins in the 230 show she was wet from head to toe the rest of the day

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Rewrite the paragraph below correcting any errors.

today we went to the aquarium to look at the marine life in the tanks were many types of fish and mammals the man was feeding mako sharks by hand james had the chance to feed the deers and may swimmed with the dolphins in the 230 show she was wet from head to toe the rest of the day

saifoo.khan · Answer

Today we went to the aquarium to look at the marine life. In the tanks were many types of fish and mammals. the man was feeding mako sharks by hand. James had the chance to feed the deers and may swimmed with the dolphins in the 2:30pm show. He was wet from head to toe the rest of the day.

saifoo.khan · Answer

i didnt get the may swimmed thing.

angela210793 · Answer

Today we went to the aquarium to look at the marina life. In the tanks were many types of fish and mammals. The man fed mako sharks by hand. James had the chance to feed the deers and he could swim with the dolphins.In the 230th show she was wet from head to toe till the rest of the day

moongazer · Answer

Today we went to the aquarium to look at the marina life. In the tanks were many types of fish and mammals. The man fed mako sharks by hand. James had the chance to feed the deers and he could swim with the dolphins.In the 2:30 show she was wet from head to toe till the rest of the day

moongazer · Answer

i just copy pasted angela's work and edited the 230