Can anyone help with editing rough draft and giving ideas on an essay?

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Once we've made the decision to work to improve our writing, we need to think about exactly what we will be working on. In other words, we need to consider how we handle the various steps involved in the whole process of writing: from discovering ideas for a topic, through successive drafts, to a final revision and proofreading.

Let's look at how three students have described the steps that they typically follow when writing a paper:

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