Question

Please help me with my grammar.

Answer 1

Smoking cigarette is easy because it is very accesible . You can see people smoke at parks, on streets and you can buy just a piece of a cigarette for a low cost. Getting addicted is easier because it has chemicals that are addicting and if you make samoking as a habit you will get addicted to it. Quitting is the hardest because if you became addicted to smoking you will feel that if you don't smoke you can't live.

Before this seminar I already have no plan to smoke. I don't even like to taste it beceause I believe that any addiction starts with tasting. Because I already watched many shows that shows smoking is very bad, and i don't have any reason to smoke because I always think that smoking won't have any benefit for me and it will just waste my money,time and life.

Answer 2

Smoking cigarette is easy as it is very accessible and cheap. This can be witnessed at parks or streets where many are seen doing so. Addictive chemicals also ensure that you are kept hooked. However, quitting, is the exact opposite as you will feel depressed when you try to stop the addiction.

Before this seminar, I have had no plans to smoke. I would not want to try it as I believe addiction would start from doing so. I believe that smoking is a bad habit and will waste money, time and life whilst bringing no benefits whatsoever. Hence, I have no reason to smoke at all.

Answer 3

Is that alright?

Answer 4

Here's my suggestion:

Smoking cigarettes is easy due to its accessibility and low price. Because of this, one can see people smoking at common places like parks and streets. Addictive chemicals easily make smoking into a habit, and strong feelings of dependency make quitting tough.

Before this seminar, I had no plans to smoke. Now, I'm scared to even taste cigarette smoke because I believe it would lead into an addiction. I've learned from many shows that smoking won't benefit me in any way and will in fact just waste my money, time, and life. I don't have any reason to smoke.

Answer 5

ajamesu's got a good answer, but it changes the sentences. If I had to just correct your grammar without changing the complexity of sentences, here's how I would do it:

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Smoking cigarettes is easy because they are very accesible . You can see people smoke at parks, on streets; and you can buy a cigarette for a low cost. Getting addicted is easy because cigarettes have chemicals that are addictive and if you make smoking a habit, you will get addicted to it. Quitting is the hard because if you became addicted to smoking, you will feel that if you don't smoke, you can't live.

Before this seminar I already had no plan to smoke. I don't even want to taste it because I believe that any addiction starts with tasting. I have already watched many shows that show smoking is very bad, and I don't have any reason to smoke, because I always think that smoking won't have any benefit for me and it will just waste my money, time and life.

Answer 6

ajemesu's answer is good