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Answer 1

Dead Poets Society - Movie review


Dead Poets Society is a 1989 drama film starring Robin Williams and directed by Peter Weir. This tells a story of a English teacher who inspires his students to be themselves and change their lives and “Seize the Day” through his teaching of poetry and literature.
Neil Perry, Todd Anderson, Knox Overstreet, Charlie Dalton , Richard Cameron, Steven Meeks, and Gerard Pitts are senior students of the Welton Academy, which is the best preparatory school in America and the values is defined by the headmaster Gale Nolan as "tradition, honour, discipline and excellence".
John Keating, a former student at the school, begins working in the school as an English teacher. He tells his students to call him “O Captain! My Captian!” In his class, he is making unusual works for his students in teaching them. An example of which is he ask the students stand on his desk in order to look at the world in a different way. In another class Keating has Neil read the introduction to their poetry textbook, prescribing a mathematical formula to rate the quality of poetry which Keating finds ridiculous, and he instructs his pupils to rip the introduction out of their books. Inspired by Keating, the secretly revive the school literary club named “Dead Poets Society”.
Neil wants to be an actor but even though he knows that his father will disapprove he still continued to the audition that is held on his school for a play. He was chosen to be one of the characters of the play. But his father “Mr. Perry” discovered that he still continued being an actor even his father disapproved him. His father confronted him and said that he will be enrolled in Harvard University in college to take up a course of Medicine. He decided to commit suicide because he can’t make his father understand his feelings.
The portrayal of characters in this film is realistic and has an impact to the audience. Robin Williams “John Keating” portrayed his character very good because of his natural delivery for his character. While the students used their creativity in their roles.
Being a 1989 film, the graphics of the film is acceptable. But their camera techniques they used made the story more interesting and like to be watched till the end.
This is a must watch movie for high school students like me. Because this film helps us to make our and face our consequences with that decisions. And as we go through our live we need to learn from our experiences and use them to be a better man. We also need to learn how to “Seize the Day” and let nothing ruin the things that will make you happy.

Answer 2

I have changed a little, and add a comma here and there. I would had to have seen the movie to help with anything but the grammar. I know it's not perfect, but I hope it helps some. Good luck!

Dead Poets Society is a 1989 drama film starring Robin Williams, and directed by Peter Weir. This tells a story of a English teacher who inspires his students to be themselves, change their lives, and “Seize the Day” through his teaching of poetry and literature.
Neil Perry, Todd Anderson, Knox Overstreet, Charlie Dalton , Richard Cameron, Steven Meeks, and Gerard Pitts are senior students of the Welton Academy, which is the best preparatory school in America. Its values are defined by the headmaster Gale Nolan as "tradition, honour, discipline and excellence".
John Keating, a former student at the school, begins working in the school as an English teacher. He tells his students to call him “O Captain! My Captian!” In his class, he is making unusual works for his students in teaching them. An example is when he asks the students to stand on their desks in order to look at the world in a different way. In another class, Keating has Neil read the introduction to their poetry textbook, prescribing a mathematical formula to rate the quality of poetry, which Keating finds ridiculous. He then instructs his pupils to rip the introduction out of their books. Inspired by Keating, his students secretly revive the school literary club, called “Dead Poets Society”.
Neil wants to be an actor, and even though he knows that his father will disapprove, he auditions for a play that is held at his school. He was chosen to be one of the characters of the play, but his father, Mr. Perry, discoveres that his son persued acting even though he disapproved. His father confrontes him and says that he will be enrolled in Harvard University to take up a course of Medicine. He decides to commit suicide because he can’t make his father understand his feelings.
The portrayal of characters in this film is realistic, and has an impact to the audience. Robin Williams portrayes his character very good because of his natural delivery of his character.
Being a 1989 film, the graphics are acceptable, but their camera techniques made the story more interesting and more likey to be watched to the end.
This is a must watch movie for high school students like me because this film helps us to make our own decisions, and face our consequences. As we go through our life, we need to learn from our experiences, and use them to be a better person. We also need to learn how to “Seize the Day,” and let nothing ruin the things that will make us happy.

Answer 3

I tried to improve your writing as much as I can do. I make some correction on punctuations and sentences. I hope it will be useful for you. Good luck!
Dead Poets Society is a 1989 drama film starring Robin Williams and directed by Peter Weir.In this film a story is told about an English teacher who guides his students through his poetry and literature courses. He advises his students to “Seize the Day” by suggesting them to change their life style and to find their real personality. Neil Perry, Todd Anderson, Knox Overstreet, Charlie Dalton , Richard Cameron, Steven Meeks, and Gerard Pitts are senior students of the Welton Academy, which is the best preparatory school in America and the values is defined by the headmaster Gale Nolan as “tradition, honour, discipline and excellence”.
John Keating, a former student at the school, begins working in the school as an English teacher. He tells his students to call him “O Captain! My Captian!” in his class. He is making unusual works for his students for teaching them. For example, he asks one of his student to stand on his desk in order to look at the world from a different perspective. In another class, Keating has Neil read the introduction to their poetry textbook, prescribing a mathematical formula to rate the quality of poetry which Keating finds ridiculous, and he instructs his pupils to rip the introduction out of their books. Inspired by Keating, the secretly revive the school literary club named “Dead Poets Society”. Neil wants to be an actor. Even though he knows that his father will disapprove, he still continue to the audition that is held on his school for a play. He is chosen for one of the characters of the play. Upon that, his father Mr. Perry realizes that his son still insists on being an actor despite the fact that he does not approve . His father confrontes him and says that he will be enrolled in Harvard University in college to take up a course of Medicine. He decides to commit suicide because he can’t make his father understand his feelings.
The portrayal of characters in this film is realistic and has an impact to the audience. Robin Williams portrayes the character of “John Keating” very good because of his natural delivery for his the character of “John Keating”.
As a 1989 film, graphics of the film are acceptable. Nevertheless, camera techniques make the story much more interesting and make people willing to watch the film till the end without no boredom. This is the movie which must be watched by all of the high school students like me because this film helps us to make our own decisions, and face our consequences. While we are going through our live, we need to learn life from our experiences and use these experiences to be a better man. We also need to learn how to “Seize the Day” and let nothing ruin the things that will make us happy.