Question

will anyone edit my thesis for my dbq?

The Catholic Church had been the center of people’s lives throughout history. During the 16th century the corruptions of the Catholic Church lead to the Protestant Reformation according to the power of the pope, Indulgences, and religious uncertainty catalyzed into a revolution of Christian belief.

Answer 1

It sounds good. Just a few punctuation mistakes...

The Catholic Church has been the center of people’s lives throughout history. During the 16th century, the corruptions of the Catholic Church lead to the Protestant Reformation, according to the power of the Pope. Indulgences, and religious uncertainty, catalyzed into a revolution of Christian belief.

Answer 2

The Catholic Church has been the center of people’s lives throughout history. During the 16th century, the corruptions of the Catholic Church lead to the Protestant Reformation; according to the power of the Pope. Indulgences and religious uncertainty catalyzed into a revolution of Christian belief.

that's what i think it is :)

Answer 3

(i just edited the above.)
the content sounds good