Please help me with my grammar

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moongazer · Answer

I realized that when you have hard problems God is always there that will help you and gives you courage in facing your problems. I also learned there are no things you can't do, but there are just things you don't try to do.


Dear God,
Please forgive me for the sins I have done. Please help me in making the right decisions to do for my life, please help me in facing the problems that i encounter,continue in guiding me on the things that I do I reach my dreams.

anonymous · Answer

first line start new sentence after 'there'.
'gives should be 'give'.

in the prayer:
after decisions instead of ''to do for'  just write 'in'.
last line  replace 'do I reach' with 'do to realise'.

anonymous · Answer

First sentence - its is better to say 'I realise'  - present tense.

moongazer · Answer

I realized that when you have hard problems God is always there that will help you and gives you courage in facing your problems. I also learned there are no things you can't do, but there are just things you don't try to do.


Dear God,
Please forgive me for the sins I have done. Please help me in making the right decisions in my life, please help me in facing the problems that i encounter,continue in guiding me on the things that I do to realise my dreams.

moongazer · Answer

thanks