Question

I need help:) well actually I need an opinion

Answer 1

The river smooth on my feet the sun warm on my back the gress soft beneath my hand as my bronze skin is tickeled by the wind as the laughter of children is heard

Answer 2

Wow wish I was there!

Answer 3

It needs some punctuation, and it should be 2 sentences:
The river is smooth on my feet, the sun is warm on my back, and the grass is soft beneath my hand. My bronzed skin is tickled by a wind carrying the sounds of children's laughter.

Answer 4

@ both of you thanks

Answer 5

:)

Answer 6

good