Question

Hi,

I need help in responding to a journal response on my reaction to Steve Jobs' death.

Can someone please help me. I already started some the beginning. It only needs to be 4 to 5 lines.

Steve Jobs was a very important person in the world of technology. He created the iPod, iPhone, etc. Steve Jobs' death took me by surprise.

Answer 1

What else should I write to make it sound better?

Answer 2

You can talk about how he dropped out of collage but still became rich.

Answer 3

Steve Jobs was a very important person in the world of technology. He created the iPod, iPhone, etc. Steve Jobs had such a creative imagination which made our lives so much easier by just the touch of a button. Steve Jobs' death took me by surprise. In fact, I was never aware that he was fighting. pancreatic cancer. Steve Jobs will always be remembered.

Answer 4

Is this good, or should I add something else?

Answer 5

perfect

Answer 6

Okay, thank you.

Answer 7

can i have a medal :)

Answer 8

I would change "person" to "man," and omit the "etc." Maybe write that line like this... He created the iPod, and the iPhone, among other things.

You say you are writing a response to a journal article? It's hard for us to help you if we didn't read the article.