Question

what is a good closing for the opening paragraph of a persuasive essay that explains why the loyalists were correct to side with britain?

Answer 1

You can end your first paragraph with your thesis statement: The loyalists were correct to side with Britain.

Answer 2

you should always have a thesis statement somewhere in your first paragraph, usually at the end. make it strong people look!

Answer 3

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