Which of the following would be the best thesis statement for a personal essay? I have a huge family. Many times during the early morning I go outside to see the numerous animals inhabiting the woods behind my house. After the loss of my uncle, my aunt’s new puppy gave her a focus on daily chores and routine. Online courses are a great help to me.
Most likely the last one
http://writingcenter.unc.edu/resources/handouts-demos/writing-the-paper/thesis-statements
The second one.
second one
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You really cannot chose a thesis without knowing what you will be discussing, in the paper. For example, if you choose the second statement, do you plan on your paper being ONLY about the animals you see in your back yard? If you plan to discuss more than that, you need a broader thesis statement.
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