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OpenStudy (anonymous):

How can I improve this essay? https://acrobat.com/#d=E-F18CcNMwveYOXNPH9PLg

OpenStudy (smurfy14):

I would my your paragraphs longer. Also, delete the sentence that starts with "i" because you dont need it. You also have a lot of he's and her's in your essay, try being more specific so you dont keep using the same words repetively.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thanks!

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