How can I make this into a good thesis? How can I make this into a good thesis? @Writing

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smurfy14 · Answer

When an individual experiences injustice, they should band together with others dealing eith the same issue and fight against it. They should also not let injustice get to them and instead keep moving forward.7:17 pmDelete

anonymous · Answer

Injustice is a commonplace problem in our daily lives, and it is important to work with others to fight against it, in order to correct the problems of bias- which always leads to injustice.

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anonymous · Answer

How can I improve this essay? https://acrobat.com/#d=E-F18CcNMwveYOXNPH9PLg

smurfy14 · Answer

That is really good but can you find a way to add in the bit about moving forward?

anonymous · Answer

ok but look @ my essay and give me some critisicm ill work on yours

anonymous · Answer

Injustice is a commonplace problem in our daily lives, and it is important to work with others to fight against it, in order to correct the problems of bias- which always leads to injustice. During that imbalanced time before bias has been corrected for,  it is important to just move forward, ignoring the injustice for the time being, to come back to it at a later date to correct it.

smurfy14 · Answer

Thank you!