Question

can anyone help me rephrase this sentence to make it seem less awkward: As a young boy, James Gatz who lived in rural North Dakota, began to critically judge himself, making lists of "self-improvement" and plans to leave home.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

As a young boy living in rural North Dakota, James Gatz began to judge himself critically. He made "self-improvement" lists and plans to leave home.

Answer 3

Thank you friend!

Answer 4

np

Answer 5

As a young boy in rural North Dakota, James Gatz began to appraise himself, making "self-improvement" lists and plans for leaving home.