Question

hero do u think u can make a suggestion on my writing.

Answer 1

You made me happy, you made me laugh, you made me love, then you broke my heart. You said you loved me but ignore me. Why have you lied to me. I try to be true but it’s hard when you push away. Don’t pretend to care, you have no heart. Don’t pretend to be sad, you have no emotions. If you really loved me you would fight to have me back. If you loved me you would not have gotten any sleep. If you truly loved me you’d be right by my side.

Answer 2

is this about me?

Answer 3

o yes saso itz definitely bout u hon

Answer 4

no itz bout my ex

Answer 5

lol haha, your bf will strangle you if he sees you calling me hon lol :P smh <3

Answer 6

It sounds like it's about me

Answer 7

haha i call everyone hon or dear so he wnt mind <3 hez really sweet

Answer 8

I did all those things shamefully

Answer 9

awww itz ok im sorry i didnt kno

Answer 10

awesome! its rather more awesome that my gf won't have a chance to write a piece like this cos i won't do any of those to her :) you're sweet too though, to think and write about that... thumbs up

Answer 11

thank you i write when i feel sad or mad i have alot of other writings

Answer 12

It's too origanal spice it up a bit its good over all but too origonal

Answer 13

I'm sure there are groups related to writing/language/etc...?

Answer 14

there is but no one wuz helpin and i asked hero for suggestions

Answer 15

@14hustc can u change wut u think needs to be fixed to help it i wont mind

Answer 16

I saw your happiness, It was beautiful. When you laughed, it was incredible. You said "I love you", I was convinced that you were a Goddess. I didn't break your heart, I was too busy trying to fix mine. I said I love you, but it was hard for me to show it. I didn't lie to you. I just have confidence issues. I try to be true too, but it’s difficult to approach you. I have a heart, and I do care. I am sad, I'm full of emotions. I really love you and I'm still fighting to get you back. I haven't had a good night's sleep since I met you. I am by your side in spirit, and if you let me, I'll be by your side forever.

Answer 17

awwwwww that is soooo sweet hero

Answer 18

haha! cool story

Answer 19

Haha well at least it's semi-intelligible and a legitimate request, unlike a decent percentage of the rubbish posted in here :-P

Answer 20

lol

Answer 21

I'm gonna post this on my blog... Shanna do I have your permission?

Answer 22

lol thank u

Answer 23

u sure do u can post anythin of mine i dnt mind

Answer 24

:) <3

Answer 25

<3

Answer 26

redj thank u for the compliment by the way

Answer 27

redj?

Answer 28

one of the guys that became my fan

Answer 29

im soooo hungry

Answer 30

here it is http://www.sasogeek.com/

Answer 31

http://www.sasogeek.com/cool-love-story/

Answer 32

Sasogeek, I did that for fun. It wasn't meant to be taken seriously.

Answer 33

it wasn't seriously taken... i just posted it cos i thought it would be fun to do it, not because i think it was a serious "love" situation