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Thesis statement ; Rapping , cars , and family that's all I need . is that good ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

No.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I agree. Trying saying "All I need is my family, cars and rapping." When writing a thesis statment you need to make where it first makes since and second you will be able to back it up with information.

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