Question

Any good ideeas for this paper? Especially in rhythm and word choice @Mathematics

Answer 1

what paper

Answer 2

THIS IS IT! :D

Answer 3

Um what are you suppose to be writing on?

Answer 4

Restaurant review

Answer 5

Yeah Its good I guess it doesn't really review the restaurant as a whole but okay

Answer 6

your report made me hungry

Answer 7

lol

Answer 8

talk about the food and the style of the place. How the waiters treated you. Was the food on time and stuff.

Answer 9

i did

Answer 10

Oh you should correct your last sentence "you money" it's "your" xD

Answer 11

lol XP

Answer 12

Haha! My mistake!!! Sorry!!!

Answer 13

I do type too fast at times. My apologies.

Answer 14

@ineedbiohelp - it is a paper of a 7th grader! So if I started using words like "connoisseur", "astounding", "palatable", "staggering", "Meisterstueck", "succulent" or an expression like "chapeau bas for the chefs", her teacher would know that she got substantial help on her paper from someone else.

Answer 15

lol

Answer 16

Well, am I wrong? :)