anyone willing to give suggestions to my college essay?

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anonymous · Answer

I don't see an essay.  Why do people insist on posting partial questions?  If you want us to proof read an essay, then you have to post the essay.

anonymous · Answer

post it and i would be willing

shadowfiend · Answer

Peeps, please be polite. If you want the essay, ineedbiohelpandquick's response is the right way to go. I understand that it can be annoying as many post partial questions like this, but keep in mind that this is not the fault of new people. You can ask them to provide more complete information without being abrupt with them. We'd like our community to be kind and welcoming, even in the face of annoyance :)

If you get tired of people posting questions that don't have complete information, simply don't reply to them. The people who post them will have lost the ability to have you help them because they will have failed to ask a good question.

Thanks! :)