Question

hi, i am writing an essay about two authors. my thesis is "Furthermore these characters in their road to self discovery illustrated self discovery as a means to acquire insight to one’s own character. For such self discovery, a positive attitude and adversity is necessary to gain a profound understanding of oneself and one’s goals in life." please fix it to reflect my opinion that to self discover ones' self one must pass through obstacles with focus and conduct sacrifice

Answer 1

These two characters, struggling to find their identities, must make sacrifices and overcome obstacles in the pursuit of self-discovery.