In “Oxygen” by Mary Oliver a person is suffering from a breathing problem. This poem is being told
from a family member’s point of view. The speaker sees the ill person’s suffering from lack of air. When
he or she has breathing issue their life can be hard. A person’s thoughts can affect the way he or she
sees a breathing problem.
When breathing with difficulty he or she can see it as a fire without plenty of wood to burn. The ill
character describes the lack of air as “the fire, stirring with a stick of iron, letting the logs lie more
loosely”(5-9). The character is said it is h

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In “Oxygen” by Mary Oliver a person is suffering from a breathing problem. This poem is being told 
from a family member’s point of view.  The speaker sees the ill person’s suffering from lack of air. When 
he or she has breathing issue their life can be hard.  A person’s thoughts can affect the way he or she 
sees a  breathing problem.
    When breathing with difficulty he or she can see it as a fire without plenty of wood to burn. The ill 
character describes the  lack of air as “the fire, stirring with a stick of iron, letting the logs lie more 
loosely”(5-9).  The character is said it is h

anonymous · Answer

How is the grammar.