can someone edit my thesis staemt? Water is a book that is haunting, yet a lyrical story of love, faith, and redemption. One of the main themes that I chose to discuss about is the alienating conditions of Hindu widowhood in colonial India, an also compare the book to the movie. There was much controversy , and numerous riots were held by very right winged political parties to stop the production of the movie.

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can someone edit my thesis staemt? Water is a book that is haunting, yet a lyrical story of love, faith, and redemption. One of the main themes that I chose to discuss about is the  alienating conditions of  Hindu widowhood in colonial India, an also compare the book to the movie. There was much controversy  , and numerous riots were held by very right winged political parties to stop the production of the movie.

anonymous · Answer

Where is it? I believe it should be at the end. (:

ash2326 · Answer

Water is a book that is haunting, yet a lyrical story of love, faith, and redemption. One of the main themes that I chose to discuss about (it) is the  alienating conditions of  Hindu widowhood in colonial India, an(should be AND) also compare(compared) the book to the movie. There was much controversy, and numerous riots were held(ignited or provoked) by right-winged political parties to stop the production of the movie.

anonymous · Answer

This is not a thesis statement.  This is a summary of the book.

Here is some good information I found, that may help you:
A good thesis statement should include four qualities: 
1. Your take on a subject about which reasonable people could disagree. 
2. Deal with a subject that can be adequately covered given the nature of the topic. 
3. Express one main idea. 
4. Asserts your conclusions about a subject.