1. Choose the best way to write the sentence.
A. In my professor’s evaluation, it says that I should work on developing my thesis.
B. My professor’s evaluation recommends that I work on developing my thesis.
C. In my professor’s evaluation, she says that I should work on developing my thesi

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1. Choose the best way to write the sentence.
	A.	In my professor’s evaluation, it says that I should work on developing my thesis.
	B.	My professor’s evaluation recommends that I work on developing my thesis.
	C.	In my professor’s evaluation, she says that I should work on developing my thesi

hero · Answer

Any sentence that uses active verbs like "recommends" and gets the point across in a simple, straightforward manner is the best sentence to use. B is the best choice. The other two uses unnecessary introductory phrases and both are written passively.

hero · Answer

In sentence B, the point is clearly made and you can read the sentence all in one breath. No wasted motion. In the other two sentences, it's like first they have to include an introductory phrase, then they have to take a comma break, then they passively state the point. A good sentence gets straight to the point, which is what B does.

anonymous · Answer

true.thnk u for ur help.