So, can anyone give me a great sentence to describe a girl screaming in self loathing? (I am working on a novel)

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anonymous · Answer

Is she screaming at herself?

anonymous · Answer

Like what's the context?

anonymous · Answer

As she bends down, the world around her turns black as coal and in a split second, she screeches like a banshee in self disgust as mascara rolls down from her weeping eyes.

anonymous · Answer

Need more context of the story really

anonymous · Answer

As the girl looks forward towards herself in the mirror she sees the disgust in her appearance, she then proceeds to scream out in despair, hoping no one will hear her loud cry.

anonymous · Answer

Sometimes less is more.  Too much description, where the effort shows, will not evoke what a simpler sentence will.