Hi! Anyone wanna edit my grammar mistakes, and make suggestions on how I can shorten my short story to two pages instead of 2.5 pages? Thank you in advance!

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anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

This is hard to do on a locked document.  You coould make another copy as a Google Document and allow public access to type in edits.

anonymous · Answer

It's a locked document? I don't think so D: But you have to highlight the words or sentences with grammar mistakes, click "Insert" and then "Comment" to add your comments. Hopefully, that helps!

anonymous · Answer

124roberts... you have to go to the review tab and click on track changes.  This will allow milliex51 to see the changes you have made.  The changes will be made in red.

jagatuba · Answer

It was not locked. At least not for me. I added many comments for you and suggested many parts that you could trim out. Hope this helps.

anonymous · Answer

Thank you Jagatuba for reading my story, giving me suggestions and correcting my grammar! Thank you!

jagatuba · Answer

My pleasure. I really liked it. :)