Question

my poem:)

Answer 1

Hey that is pretty cool Karate. How did you get inspired to do that?

Answer 2

well, i was just thinking and it had to have an alliteration as my tteacher said and it had to be a specific amount of syllables in a line, and so i thought a sounded cool!:) i have to perform it tommorow

Answer 3

Wow. That is pretty cool. I like alliteration, as Colm will tell you.

Answer 4

thats cool pretty preetha;)

Answer 5

I like it. Good luck reciting it. Looks like there might be a couple of tongue twisters in there. ;)

Answer 6

haha yea i messed up i one line but no one caught my mistake!:)

Answer 7

Good for you. most of the time if you just plow through it without calling attention to you mistake, most people won't notice.

Answer 8

haha yea:)