Choose one thesis statement you constructed. Complete a type of prewriting such as mapping, listing, or outlining for your chosen thesis statement. • My first thesis is on the emotion of pride and how it alters other emotions. • My second thesis is on the positive effects of pride. • My third thesis is on the negative effect of pride. • My forth thesis is on the origin of the word pride.
I'd say move the forth thesis to the first and bump everything down one spot, so: origin of the word pride emotion of pride and how it alters other emotions positive effects of pride negative effect of pride The reason why I say this is because the first question that readers would ask is: "What is pride?" The forth thesis answers that question.
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