Choose one thesis statement you constructed. Complete a type of prewriting such as mapping, listing, or outlining for your chosen thesis statement.

• My first thesis is on the emotion of pride and how it alters other emotions.
• My second thesis is on the positive effects of pride.
• My third thesis is on the negative effect of pride.
• My forth thesis is on the origin of the word pride.

Question

Choose one thesis statement you constructed. Complete a type of prewriting such as mapping, listing, or outlining for your chosen thesis statement.

•	My first thesis is on the emotion of pride and how it alters other emotions.
•	My second thesis is on the positive effects of pride.
•	My third thesis is on the negative effect of pride.
•	My forth thesis is on the origin of the word pride.

anonymous · Answer

I'd say move the forth thesis to the first and bump everything down one spot, so:
origin of the word pride
emotion of pride and how it alters other emotions
positive effects of pride
negative effect of pride

The reason why I say this is because the first question that readers would ask is: "What is pride?" The forth thesis answers that question.