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OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Melinda:As you asked Pain has brought us together, As our destinies foretold, Meant we are to live together, Holding each other tight, Close to our hearts, In rain, snow, or cold Hope had left me alone, The world had forsaken me, When I wept alone, In a forlorn valley, You found me. Seized have you back, My life from the clutches of death, It is your love and your love alone, That has restored my breath When the talons of misfortune, Saw to tear me apart, It was you, Who gave me refuge in his heart Lies and evils have only tried, To separate us, But it has only, Fulfill

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Fulfilled its purpose Every moment, I feel my heart beat, Is every moment, I realize without you, My life would never be complete. Nothing in life is certain, So they say, But if ever given a chance, To have things my way, I would close my eyes, And fall back in your arms, Forget my worries, Let go of worldly desires and charms, I grow impatient As the day draws near, When it shall happen, Which our enemies fear, We will become one, And shall part never, In life and in death, We shall be together, Forever and ever!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Aw, that's interesting. I thought it was a bit cliche but when I finished reading the poem, it just felt comforting. Nice, nice.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thanks..was a bit too big though..oh well. xD

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Fav part: But if ever given a chance, To have things my way, I would close my eyes, And fall back in your arms, Forget my worries, Let go of worldly desires and charms.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Nah, it was very good!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Do you like writing about love or other stuff as well?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I do, not so much now though...

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Still, very cool. Maybe I will write some of my own now...

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thanks, looking forward to reading your works if its fine :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yep, I will let you know how it goes.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Only if you have time though =)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Problem is writing in English... sometimes I can't express myself how I would like to. But the challenge only makes it worthier :P

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Haha well same is with me.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

whats your native language again? arabic?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

It's Indian/Hindi.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Oh. Nice, nice!

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