In the same year, approximately 25 other teens, 12 of them Canadian, also dropped out of school; this time due to teen pregnancy.

Lolol Sorry about my random numbers (facts are way off)...I can't post my original sentence online since when my teachers uses TurnIt In to check for plagiarism it may say I plagiarized from this question. My own sentence is about poverty and I have my facts straight:)

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In the same year, approximately 25 other teens, 12 of them Canadian,  also dropped out of school; this time due to teen pregnancy. 


Lolol Sorry about my random numbers (facts are way off)...I can't post my original sentence online since when my teachers uses TurnIt In to check for plagiarism it may say I plagiarized from this question. My own sentence is about poverty and I have my facts straight:)

pottersheep · Answer

*Do I use a semicolon?

pottersheep · Answer

also dropped out of school; this time due to teen pregnancy. 
                                      ^there

anonymous · Answer

How about,
In the same year, twenty-five teens, twelve of them Canadian,  dropped out of school due to teen pregnancy.
The previous sentence was a run-on sentence.

pottersheep · Answer

Is it really? I have to include that it's from a *different* reason though..I'll change it up a bit thank you