Question

Please check my grammar with this critique paper about "Common errors on conjunctions"

Answer 1

English is a broad are of language it has complex rules that makes it difficult to comprehend. One of the most common errors on English grammar is the usage of conjunctions.

The topic is about common errors for conjunctions. The author used several examples to illustrate how different conjunctions are used in a sentence. The author started the article on showing how conjunctions are used in schools and what the use of conjunctions is. He stated different examples of the correct ways of using conjunctions. He elaborated common mistakes in using conjunctions and explains why it is wrong.

The author focused in giving examples of sentences so that readers will get a view of what are the different kinds of conjunctions. The author clearly introduced and described the common errors on conjunctions by giving different examples. The author also explained how the use of conjunctions is wrong in the sentence.


Reading this article is important because it teaches people on how conjunctions should be used correctly.

The article is easy to understand and there are no grammar mistakes made by the author. Even if the author correctly introduce conjunctions, the article still lacksexamples about the common errors in conjunctions.

Answer 2

I cleaned up the grammar a bit, but it still needs some revising in my opinion:

English is a broad area of language; it has complex rules that make it difficult to comprehend. One of the most common errors in English grammar is the usage of conjunctions.

The topic is about common errors for conjunctions. The author used several examples to illustrate how different conjunctions are used in a sentence. The author started the article by showing how conjunctions are used in schools and what the uses of conjunctions are. He displayed different examples of the correct usage of conjunctions. He elaborated on common mistakes in using conjunctions and explained why they are wrong.

The author focused on giving examples of sentences so that readers will get a view of the different kinds of conjunctions. The author clearly introduced and described the common errors on conjunctions by giving different examples. The author also explained how the uses of conjunctions are wrong in the sentences.

Reading this article is important because it educates people on how conjunctions should be used properly.

The article is easy to understand and there are no grammar mistakes made by the author. Even if the author correctly introduces conjunctions, the article still lacks examples about the common errors in conjunctions.