I need help formulating a thesis for my short essay of Hamlet's To be or not to be soliloquy D: help!

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anonymous · Answer

Shakespeare's Hamlet has the _____________est soliloquy in all of literature.  

The easiest way to figure out your thesis is to describe what your essay is about to your mom, or cat or girl/boy friend.  My essay is about.... and that is your thesis.  Then you just spend the rest of your essay defending what it is your essay is about.

For example: I might say, Mom, my essay is about how Hamlet is really kind of a whiney little toad...

So my thesis would be ...  In his famous Soliloquy Hamlet is not at all sympathetic, he is a privileged rich royal who focuses on his the petty problems of the royal family while the rest of society is exploited by the rich aristocracy...or whatever.

anonymous · Answer

ohhh, into a basic sentence first and then improve it? Thank you! :$