Question

Hi, everyone! I wrote a paper of 300 words and I would like to check its grammar. The paper does not need to be formal, it is question/response. Here it is... Thanks!

Answer 1

Hello, I'm not the strongest at grammar, but I did edit it for you :) hope my editing is okay - your paper is good :)

Answer 2

Thanks!!

Answer 3

No worries :)

Answer 4

I cannot save in .odt format, but I was able to view the file and make suggestions, so here they are:
Quotations should be in double-lines (") rather than single (')
Second sentence should have commas around the phrase "in some period of time"
The word "some" in the above phrase should be changed to "one"
In the same sentence the word "became" should be replaced with the present tense "become."
In the next sentence the second occurrence of the word "in" should be changed to "into"
Sentence 5 in paragraph 1 should begin with "For example,"
In the above sentence I believe you meant to say "when god presents Eve to Adam"
In the next sentence I would caution you not to claim that something could ever be seen as beautiful.
In the same sentence again, I assume you meant to end with "what it could be like IN Hell."
In sentence 2 of paragraph 2 you again state as fact that something is not beautiful, this should be clarified as opinion.
After the word "suffering" in the same sentence, there should be a semi-colon (;) followed by the word "the" , rather than a comma (,)
In the third paragraph, I am unsure whether reggaeton is spelled correctly.